Writing Contests

I like writing about things I’ve experienced; it helps me make sense of things.

At one point, while working at 9 to 5 job and taking creative writing courses at night, I wondered if I was any good at writing.

So I entered this true story in an anonymous online contest for the Edmonton Food Bank in Alberta, Canada, under the spirituality category.

It won in its category. I don’t remember the year. 

The Peach by Rayne Dowell

The Peach by Rayne Dowell

It was the last peach left in the box, and it was the largest, most perfect, luscious peach I’d ever seen. 

I quickly grabbed it and scurried away. 

Lovingly, I gently washed it and set aside not one, but two, paper towels to eat along with it: knowing it would be so succulent, that rivers of its wonderful nectar would surely need to escape out of the sides of my mouth. 

That night, I dreamed of eating my peach.

In the morning, I made my lunch and gently placed my beautiful peach inside my lunch bag.  Smiling, I thought about eating it outside, beneath a tree, in the sunshine, at lunch. 

I sauntered happily to the bus stop and gingerly placed my lunch bag next to me on the bus bench.

I thought about my wondrous peach on the bus ride – how there wasn’t a puncture mark, a bruise or a blemish on its skin.  My mouth tingled with anticipation. 

I revelled in the fact that this peach was perfect and I was going to be eating it.

The bus lurched to a stop.  I looked, and halfway down the street, a homeless guy was sitting on the sidewalk. 

Then a strange feeling bubbled up my spine and gently landed in my head.  The feeling morphed into a small, soft, insistent voice that told me I needed to give my peach to him. 

I was stunned, I couldn’t believe it… 

I balked, unable to accept my terrible luck… the irony of it.

I debarked the bus and dejectedly shuffled to the crosswalk, my brain wanting to cross the street.

Still, my feet kept walking towards him, the voice quietly encouraging me. 

As I kept walking towards him, my brain rebelled, telling me to run! Run! with my peach. 

Instead, my feet stopped in front of him. 

Silently, he looked up at me.  I sighed and finally knelt down in front of him. 

I slowly brought the peach out of my lunch bag and held it lovingly in my hands, turning it this way and that, admiring it… torturing myself.

Finally, I lowered the peach and looked him in the eye.  

“It was the last one, you know…  I love peaches.”

He stayed silent.  

“I was so looking forward to eating it, I can’t believe it,” I said, shaking my head. 

Still, he said nothing.  

I sighed. 

Reverently, I handed him the peach.

With dirty, cracked, rough hands, he gently cupped it.  

“You’ll be needing these,” I said, giving him the paper towels.  

I took one last look at the peach.  

“You’re a lucky guy, you know.”  

He nodded his head solemnly. 

Sighing again, I stood up and slowly walked away.

At the end of the block, I looked back, and he was still cupping the peach, looking at me. 

When I remember that day, it occurs to me that he gave me a greater gift that day than I gave him.

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