Writing Contests
I like writing about things I’ve experienced; it helps me make sense of things.
At one point, while working at 9 to 5 job and taking creative writing courses at night, I wondered if I was any good at writing.
So I entered this true story in an anonymous online contest for the Edmonton Food Bank in Alberta, Canada, under the spirituality category.
It won in its category. I don’t remember the year.
The Peach by Rayne Dowell
It was the last peach left in the box, and it was the largest, most perfect, luscious peach I’d ever seen.
I quickly grabbed it and scurried away.
Lovingly, I gently washed it and set aside not one, but two, paper towels to eat along with it: knowing it would be so succulent, that rivers of its wonderful nectar would surely need to escape out of the sides of my mouth.
That night, I dreamed of eating my peach.
In the morning, I made my lunch and gently placed my beautiful peach inside my lunch bag. Smiling, I thought about eating it outside, beneath a tree, in the sunshine, at lunch.
I sauntered happily to the bus stop and gingerly placed my lunch bag next to me on the bus bench.
I thought about my wondrous peach on the bus ride – how there wasn’t a puncture mark, a bruise or a blemish on its skin. My mouth tingled with anticipation.
I revelled in the fact that this peach was perfect and I was going to be eating it.
The bus lurched to a stop. I looked, and halfway down the street, a homeless guy was sitting on the sidewalk.
Then a strange feeling bubbled up my spine and gently landed in my head. The feeling morphed into a small, soft, insistent voice that told me I needed to give my peach to him.
I was stunned, I couldn’t believe it…
I balked, unable to accept my terrible luck… the irony of it.
I debarked the bus and dejectedly shuffled to the crosswalk, my brain wanting to cross the street.
Still, my feet kept walking towards him, the voice quietly encouraging me.
As I kept walking towards him, my brain rebelled, telling me to run! Run! with my peach.
Instead, my feet stopped in front of him.
Silently, he looked up at me. I sighed and finally knelt down in front of him.
I slowly brought the peach out of my lunch bag and held it lovingly in my hands, turning it this way and that, admiring it… torturing myself.
Finally, I lowered the peach and looked him in the eye.
“It was the last one, you know… I love peaches.”
He stayed silent.
“I was so looking forward to eating it, I can’t believe it,” I said, shaking my head.
Still, he said nothing.
I sighed.
Reverently, I handed him the peach.
With dirty, cracked, rough hands, he gently cupped it.
“You’ll be needing these,” I said, giving him the paper towels.
I took one last look at the peach.
“You’re a lucky guy, you know.”
He nodded his head solemnly.
Sighing again, I stood up and slowly walked away.
At the end of the block, I looked back, and he was still cupping the peach, looking at me.
When I remember that day, it occurs to me that he gave me a greater gift that day than I gave him.